Tuesday, March 3, 2009

The Scary Night by Clara


There was a scary night. An old woman and an old man were in bed. They could not sleep.

That night a cat came up the stairs and they thought it was a monster. The roof bits flapped, the owl went "hoo hoo hoo".

They were soaked. The dog barked, the trees swished, there was lightning and a STORM
coming. It was a bad night.

4 comments:

  1. This is a good story because you used good words and lots of ryhmes.

    Charlotte and Josh

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  2. You used full stops which was good because we can tell when the sentences finish.

    Nick

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  3. clara is a very good writer because she used detale with her story.

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