Tuesday, March 3, 2009
The Scary Night by Clara
There was a scary night. An old woman and an old man were in bed. They could not sleep.
That night a cat came up the stairs and they thought it was a monster. The roof bits flapped, the owl went "hoo hoo hoo".
They were soaked. The dog barked, the trees swished, there was lightning and a STORM coming. It was a bad night.
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This is a good story because you used good words and lots of ryhmes.
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You used full stops which was good because we can tell when the sentences finish.
ReplyDeleteNick
She used her amaganation.
ReplyDeleteclara is a very good writer because she used detale with her story.
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