It was a stormy night. The old woman and the old man could not get to sleep because of the noise.
They did not look out the window again because of the lightening, they were scared of the lightening. Then BANG the lightening hit the house. The house shook and wobbled and they were worried that their house would fall down. But it didn't fall down and they were able to go back to sleep.
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