shshshsh. The rain went pitter, patter, pitter, patter on the roof. It's geting late and I want to go to bed.
"Shhhhhh. I don't know," she said.
Then 'crash', 'bang', the doors crashed open.
"Mummy," cried the little boy. But there was no answer.
"Hoo, hoo," called the owl.
At last they fell asleep.
zzzzzzzz....
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It was good because you used good sentences. The sentences had lots of detail.
ReplyDeleteEden
I liked how you ended the story.
ReplyDeletePayton.
This was a great story because it was bit scary!
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