Tuesday, June 2, 2009
Goldilocks and the Three Bears by Nick
One day the three bears woke up and made their porridge. They found out that their porridge was too hot so they went for a huge walk in the forest. a little girl called Goldilocks saw a huge cottage. She walked inside and she saw three bowls of porridge. She said "daddy's porridge is too hot, mummy's porridge is too cold, baby's porridge is just right'.
Her legs got sore and she went and sat on daddy bears chair. She said "this chair is too hard, mummy bears chair is too squishy. Baby bears chair is just right". Then she got super tired and she went upstairs. She hopped onto daddy bears bed. His bed was too hard. Mummy bears bed is too fluffy. Baby bears bed was just right. Then the three bears came home and they saw Goldilocks sleeping in the little bears bed. She woke up suddenly and ran all the way home. The three bears came rushing after that fast old Goldilocks.
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I love your story Nick! I am learning to blog with Rob this morning, From Mum
ReplyDeleteIt's great to see how you are now using speech in your writing Nick!
ReplyDeleteRob