Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Goldilocks and the Three Bears by Abby

Once upon a time there were three bears, mother bear, daddy bear and baby bear. Mother bear made some delicious porridge. It was too hot so they went for a walk and Goldilocks and Goldilocks knocked on the door but no one was there. She went in and tried some porridge.

Daddy bears porridge was too hot and mother bears porridge was too cold but baby bears porridge was just right. She sat down pn Daddy bears chair it was not comfortable and she sat down on mother bears cahir it was too soft and baby bears chair was just right but it broke. Then Goldilocks went upstairs. She went to sleep.

The bears got home. Mother bear said " who's been eating eating my porridge " and father bear said "who's been sitting on my chair" and baby bear said 'who is this?'. Mother bear said it was Goldilock and Goldilock ran home quickly. She told her Mum the story but her Mum did not think it was true.

4 comments:

  1. Well done Abby. Fantastic retelling of the fairy tale as well as amazing punctuation. Love Mum

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  2. I now that i am good at it too by abby

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  3. I now that i am good at it too by abby

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  4. Delicous,comfortable are fantastic
    words Abby WoW
    From Clara

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