Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Rupunzel by Isabella

Once upon a time there was a couple who lived together for 10 years. The mother was pregnant she thought she was going to have a baby girl. One night the mother wanted strawberries but she got lettuce and tomato and mayonaise. Next door there was a garden full of strawberries. So the father went next door to pick some strawberries out of his next door neighbours house. His scary neighbour came out.
"Who has been picking my delicious tasty strawberries".
She was ugly and he did not like to look at her. She was a witch.
He said " my wife is having a baby girl in a few weeks time.
"How interesting. If I can have your baby you can have the strawberries."
"Okay".
So they made a deal. He did not know what to tell his wife.

Isabella

1 comment:

  1. Isabella,s rupunzel story was great because it had full stops and capital letters at the right time.

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