One night there was a storm outside. There was rain and wind. The rain went, "splash, splash, splash". The wind went "woooooo... wooooo," and by our letterbox the owl went, "Whooooo... whooooo" and the mail was falling out of the letterbox.
When the storm had gone a little girl found the letters and looked at the label.
"It is my friends I cannot believe it" she said. So she ran to her house and knocked on the door.
But just then the storm started again and she got soaked at her friends house.
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Great improvements to the writing Payton. You added a lot of extra detail for your audience!
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WOW! Fantastic work TTT - you guys must be having so much fun at school.
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