Sunday, November 22, 2009

Don't do

Don't do
Don't do
Don't do that
Don't pull faces
Don't tease the cat

Don't pick your ears
Don't be rude at school
Who do they think I am?

Some kind of fool?

Monday, November 9, 2009

Poetry Focus

Over the past few weeks we have had a peotry focus in the class.

We have written cinquains, acrostic poems, rhyming couplets, poems about the things people say and descriptive and imaginary poems. Our success criteria was different for each of these.

We are excited about our work and are currently creating images to go with them.

Please give us feedback.

The Magic Box by Zach

In my box I will put...
a land of dreams,
the world's best skateboard
and a blue glittery fish for my pet.

In my box I will put...
a witch running around,
a dog on a broomstick
and two crocodiles fighting over fire.

I will put in my box...
a living castle.

I will fashion my box from shiny stones
and put a star on top.

In my box I will go
surfing the seas and
skateboarding around a park.

If my bed grew wings... by Hamish

If my bed grew red wings I would fly
to Hundred Acre Wood.
Next I would go to a yellow castle made of
gold and coins.
I might see knights fighting on horses.

The Magic Box by Payton

I will put in the box...
Mr Mistoffelees the black and sparkly cat,
and a sparkly, spotty, special wish fish.

I will put in the box...
my favourite bear,
the slowest snail and the smallest house,
a baby carrying his mother.

My box is fashioned from red rubies.

In my box I will put...
the 13th month,
a witch on a trampoline
and a child on a broomstick.

In my box I will jump up into the sky
and see a baby elephant having a bath.

What if my bed grew wings... by Will

What if my bed grew wings,
I would fly to France.
It is a fascinating place and I would
fly over the Eiffel Tower.
I will fly over rugby fields.
I would down and see men playing rugby,
and on the way back I would see the great blue seas
and oceans.

What if my bed had wings... by Flynn

What if your bed grew lots of golden wing with feathers sticking up.
It might drop you at super ice cream land.
Everything would be ice cream.
The house would be ice cream and all the bells and
you are allowed to eat the bells.
You are allowed to eat anything,
because it just grows back!

Magic Box by Josh

I will put in my magic box...
a dolphin splashing in the waves,
a land of sparkling lollies
and some beautiful art work.

I will put in the box...
some sparkling water,
and old broken down castle from long ago,
and a handsome prince.

I will put in the box...
a fairy from lolly world,
a pyramid made of silver and gold
and a skeleton from a golden king.

I will put in the box...
a black sun, a dog's wish and three legs.

In my box I will play soccer, rugby,
and swim and run.
I will be a champion!

Sunday, November 8, 2009

If I had a flying bed... by Eden

If I had a flying bed,
I would go to a magic castle.
It is covered in glittery, pretty diamonds,
that are dazzling with beautiful flowers.
It has magnificent fairies that are dancing
and flying around.

Magic Box by Clara

I will put in the magic box...
a sparkly piece of paper that shines in the sun.
A fantastic piece of writing,
and a baby panda as cute as a puppy.

I will put in the box...
a princess flying on a dragon,
a wand for a cowboy
and a bed to keep a child warm.

My box is fashioned from paper.
It is all around the box.
There are secret mermaids on the fashioned paper and
jewellery for the mermaids.

In my box I will sail on a boat that has sparkly stars on it and glows.
There are some black elephants we can ride on
and a blue trampoline.

The Magic Box by William

I will put in my box
a castle that glows
a gold, fluffy cat
and a blue rugby ball.

I will put in my box
glowing wheels off the fastest train,
a wheelbarrow filled with money,
and a handful of chocolate.

The Magic Box by Isabella

I will put in my box
a fish that could wish
my best sparkly charm necklace
and a sparkly diamond lily.

I will put in my box
a beautiful, butterfly book
the reddest sunset
and a crystal castle.

My box is fashioned from silk,
stone and silver.
It has secrets on the sides.

I will put in my box
a sparkly unicorn horn,
a witch with wings
and a fairy on a broomstick.

In my box I shall dance on a famous stage,
in a pink tutu.
I will end up in Fiji under the brightest sun.

If my bed grew wings... by Jack

If my bed grew ginormous white wings,
I would go to super lolly land.
I would collect as many lollies as I could.
I would tell my warm and cuddly bed to go to
the funniest loony tune show.
Abracadabra, in 3 seconds we are there.
I could tell it was Road runner and Coyote.
I looked round this mysterious place.
When I was not looking road runner
ran into me like mad!

What if my bed had wings... by Austin

What if my bed had wings
And I went to the zoo.
What if I went to the beach and it was very hot,
So hot I got an ice cream.
What if I went to Treasure Island.
What if I saw a dragon who was green and he was blowing fire!

What if my bed had wings... by Yusuf

What if my bed had wings?
I would go to Secret Sparkly Spy World.
When I got there I saw tonnes and hundreds of spies.
They suddenly started to secretly spy on me.
But one of the spies wasn't there.
One went missing.

The Magic Box by Jasmine

I will put in my box
A white and soft pony, with shiny blue eyes.

I will put in my box
A very shiny golden compass and
a box of golden honey.

I will put in my box
a shiny, pink unicorn's horn,
a pink ballet tutu,
and a diary with a picture of a glorious fairy.

My box is made from old wood the colour of shiny gold.

If My Bed Had Wings by Jasmine

If I had a bed with wings
it would take me to a tall and beautiful, sparkly castle.
I would see a glorious garden
with fairies picking flowers.

If my bed flew by Finn

If my bed flew I would go to Monster Planet.
I might see a ginormous monster, crossed with a chicken,
and a one-eyed monster that is a blue blob!

The Magic Box by Charlotte

I will put in the box
My best, colourful charm bracelet.
A beautiful, fluttery butterfly
And my spotty, special purse.

I will put in my box
A big, dazzling, droopy dinosaur,
A flowery, shiny, magnificent, bright diamond ball.

I will put in my box
A unicorn's horn
A cat who likes eating bones
And a dog that like to climb trees.

My box is fashioned from tones and sparkly, glittery diamonds.
Shells that glow in the night and lots of dots and rubies.

The Magic Box by Holly

I will put in the box
lovely Lou, the brown bird,
the reddest sunset,
and a shining golden ring.

I will put in the box
a puppy with the silliest coat,
an extraordinary sparkling drop of a pond,
and a beautiful princess with a silky, golden dress.

I will put in the box
a cow girl's wing and
a seagull riding a horse.

I will put in the box
a green frog in a canoe,
a golden girl
and a magic fish.

My box is fashioned from gold thread in the corners,
spots on the lid and pink hearts.

In my box I will swim through the bluest waves, play with animals
and phone my best friends.