Tuesday, May 26, 2009

Goldilocks and the Three Bears

Once upon a time one day the bears ate some porridge but it was too hot so they went outside to warm up. Then just a little while Goldilocks came and tasted the porridge and then the bears came. Goldilocks ran outside. She ran and ran. The mother more.

Nicholas

1 comment:

  1. I loved your story because you used full stops and capital letters.

    Nick

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